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Posted by Cole
on 5/6/2009, 7:56 am, in reply to "Challenging Jenny"
Allison, this is a great story! Wish it would have been a little longer with a few more details for both fights. Maybe some more cheering by the dads as their daughters each got in some licks. But it's a great read the way it is written and I couldn't have done as well. Your shame and embarrassment came through without you needing to get graphic. Congratulations.
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