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Posted by Marc Adin
on 12/16/2006, 8:35 pm, in reply to "Re: ringing marc b adin poem"
thanks for your kind words, joanie. marc/
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: hi marc, my boyfriend knows i love poetry so
: when he was doing his anscestry work 1 nite
: he printed out some of your poetry for me.so
: sweet. i read them & loved the ones he
: picked.i still have to pick out some more. I
: really identfy with your poetic use of a
: view/perspective of life. and the rest.i
: hope you dont mind but i have responded to
: this poem by speaking back in prose. i am
: very shy and new at expressing my ideas to
: others this way,so you are the first person
: to be an audience besides my close friends.
: here it is ;you ended with,alive and happy,
: as if we reached for immortality and felt
: her within our grasp.... and yes we did, we
: felt her, and within our hearts we knew her.
: we learned to grasp the immortal within our
: soul and with that we remain..forever
: present..eternal, eternally now ..ageless.
: free from mortalities grasp we now are here
: to grow &find the others and remind them
: also to conqer the enemy and its ally fear.
: False* Evidence* Appearing* Real*
:i liked that lin "conqerer of enemy and
: its ally Fear"
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