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Posted by joanie clark on 2/27/2006, 2:24 am, in reply to "ringing marc b adin poem" --Previous Message--
: hi marc, my boyfriend knows i love poetry so
: when he was doing his anscestry work 1 nite
: he printed out some of your poetry for me.so sweet. i read them & loved the ones he picked.i still have to pick out some more. I really identfy with your poetic use of a view/perspective of life. and the rest.i hope you dont mind but i have responded to this poem by speaking back in prose. i am very shy and new at expressing my ideas to others this way,so you are the first person to be an audience besides my close friends. here it is ;you ended with,alive and happy, as if we reached for immortality and felt her within our grasp.... and yes we did, we felt her, and within our hearts we knew her. we learned to grasp the immortal within our soul and with that we remain..forever present..eternal, eternally now ..ageless. free from mortalities grasp we now are here to grow &find the others and remind them also to conqer the enemy and its ally fear. False* Evidence* Appearing* Real*
:i liked that lin "conqerer of enemy and its ally Fear"
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