Posted by leila on 11/20/2006, 12:44 pm
89.120.141.91
I am not writting poems like you do, but this is a poem that I wrote as a tribute to your greatness. THANKS YOU'RE THERE!
I was locked up in a deep cold valley
Where no sunshine coming through the trees,
I was struggle to get out but something wants me,
Someone locked me there and throw the keys.
What's happening to me? I cry for fear,
And I get the answer from the rocks,
And the answer was an empty quiet
Crawling like a snake ... and someone laughts.
Vultures dominates a piece of heaven,
Kings of neverending skies they share,
Left their perfect wings to sents me message
Written by the blood and flames: BEWARE!
You are doomed to burn in hell forever,
You can pray, but no one's here your pain,
No escape from valley of forgotten,
Come dare and struggle, but your fight's in vain!
Then I saw the heavy mountain shaking,
From the depths to me a growing noise
Coming faster like the fastest lightning,
And I understood what saved me: WAS YOUR VOICE!
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