Posted by Don S. on April 9, 2008, 1:56:33, in reply to "...continued"
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What a night, thanks for sharing!
--Previous Message--
: Now, there was another
: girl in attendance that
: evening who I was very
: briefly acquainted with
: a few years earlier and
: who intrigued me that
: night. She was Jamie's
: stepsister Tina, an
: adorable mix of woman
: and girl who had just
: graduated high school
: the week before. She
: had light brown hair
: running past her
: shoulders and the cutest
: imaginable face,
: conveying an image that
: personified a "girl
: on the cusp of
: womanhood" look.
: But she definitely had a
: woman's body tightly
: packaged in an amazing
: black dress. I had not
: seen Tina in a couple of
: years, and knew she had
: a reputation for being a
: good girl in high
: school. Never would I
: have imagined she would
: be
: this beautiful by the
: end of high school and
: NEVER would have I
: expected she'd follow in
: Jamie's footsteps and
: become a cigarette
: smoker. So imagine my
: delighted surprise as I
: saw Tina and a cluster
: of friends (two
: girls and two guys)
: ascend the stairs to
: that smoky balcony.
: Whatever could Tina be
: doing up there????? The
: next 30 seconds would
: tell the tale as Tina
: extracted a pack of
: Marlboro Lights from her
: purse and lit herself
: up. Oh I had to get a
: closer look at this!
:
: And with my usual
: horrific timing, five
: seconds before I got up
: to go to the balcony,
: the cluster of four
: chain-smoking hotties
: got up to go downstairs.
: The good news is that I
: now had an open table to
: sit and watch
: Tina, but the bad news
: is my other smokers were
: no longer gonna be there
: to add to the show. I
: sat the table they
: vacated and the ashtray
: on the table was
: overflowing with
: Marlboro Lights
: butts....and keep in
: mind that only three of
: these four girls were
: smoking. There had to
: have been 15 butts in
: that ashtray in just a
: little over an hour.
: You could this wasn't
: Tina's first time
: smoking as she ingested
: those smoky carcinogens,
: but the hottest part of
: all was that none of her
: three friends were
: smoking with her. This
: group had to move
: upstairs for the sole
: purpose of
: assisting Tina's
: cigarette addiction in
: the most under-the-radar
: part of the bar where
: some of her elders would
: be least likely to see
: her polluting her lungs.
:
: This spot on the balcony
: proved an even better
: venue for sightings than
: below as I could see
: Tina close-up (she
: smoked three cigarettes
: in the hour or so that I
: sat at that spot and
: nervously/playfully
: twisted and maneuvered
: that pack of Marlboro
: Lights in her hands
: while chatting with her
: nonsmoking friends) and
: watch the smoking below.
: The gorgeous long-haired
: brunette smoker
: continued to suck down
: one cigarette after
: another in nonstop
: succession (as black as
: her dress was, I promise
: you
: that her lungs were
: blacker), but my other
: major interest of the
: evening, the blonde in
: the blue skirt, would go
: a good 45 minutes before
: lighting up another
: cigarette. As I kept
: looking her way from
: above, I noticed her
: making eyes with me
: several times as well,
: and wondered if her
: sudden aversion to
: lighting up was the
: result of her hoping I
: would court her. I know
: that was what my ego
: kept telling me at
: least. But even beyond
: the Big Three, there
: were at least a dozen
: hotties on the balcony
: and below incessantly
: smoking by this point in
: the evening as the dance
: had
: just begun, including
: four of the five
: bridesmaids still decked
: out in the
: bridesmaids' dresses.
:
: Keep in mind, I was very
: shy at this time and
: didn't really know
: anyone there, so pretty
: much stayed to myself
: fetishing and in some
: ways standing out like a
: sore thumb. About 25
: minutes into my sit on
: the balcony, I was
: bailed out by my friend
: Ryan who would sit there
: with me and chat for the
: next half hour or so,
: helping me continue to
: watch smokers. And
: finally, that blonde
: cutie in the blue skirt
: would light up another
: cigarette....and never
: looked back for the rest
: of the night, chaining
: through at least five
: more before I would
: leave.
:
: After chatting up on the
: less-noisy balcony for
: awhile, Ryan and I
: decided
: to head downstairs to
: the dance. Ryan was a
: double-edged sword for
: me. Being in his
: company helped me seem a
: little less like a
: bashful wallflower, but
: he's a total pretty boy
: (think a 20-something
: John Edwards)
: who the girls really go
: for. Next to him, I was
: suddenly part of the
: social apparatus of the
: evening that I was
: excluded from up to that
: point, but I nonetheless
: paled in his shadow.
: Still, not two minutes
: after arriving
: downstairs, the
: nonsmoking brunette
: comes over, grabs both
: of us by the hands and
: drags us onto the dance
: floor. I'm not a dancer
: and felt it was just my
: luck to be beckoned by
: the one of the only
: nonsmokers at the
: bar (but she was very
: attractive nonetheless),
: but still enjoyed the
: social
: experience. I even got
: in on the dollar dance
: with Jamie, which was
: kind of hot by itself.
:
: When the dancing ended,
: Ryan and I returned to
: talk near the bar and
: the tables on the lower
: level. The crowd was
: starting to thin down
: (it was approaching
: midnight), but all of
: the smoking babes were
: still here. The bar was
: one giant smoky haze at
: this point, with the
: vast majority of the
: smoke being produced by
: gorgeous early-20's
: chicks. Tina descended
: the stairs with her
: group (at least one of
: whom I believe was a
: boyfriend), and with
: most of the adult family
: members having left at
: this point, Tina proudly
: displayed that pack of
: Marlboro Lights in her
: hand as she bid adieu
: to friends.
:
: And right when I thought
: the evening couldn't get
: weirder, I catch Ryan
: all
: but drooling over that
: chain-smoking brunette,
: the hottest girl there
: that
: evening. As attractive
: as many of the rest of
: the girls were that
: evening,
: this brunette was at a
: totally different level.
: Ryan confides to me
: that
: he really wants a piece
: of that brunette, who at
: this point was sitting
: by herself smoking yet
: another cigarette (by
: now her own pack of
: Camels was gone and she
: was now stealing
: all-whites from the pack
: of her date, who smoked
: far less than she did).
: I couldn't believe it
: because I remembered
: Ryan being pretty
: strongly anti-smoking in
: high school.
: Apparently, he
: either had a change of
: heart or this girl was
: so hot that even her
: chain-smoking wasn't
: enough of a deterrant.
: I agreed with Ryan that
: she was incredible but
: expressed concern that
: she already had a
: boyfriend to which he
: responded, "I don't
: see any rings on those
: fingers, though."
:
: I was fully prepared to
: watch Ryan court this
: brunette, which I
: thought
: would help give me the
: confidence to go after
: the blonde with the blue
: skirt, who was making
: eyes with me with
: increasing frequency and
: she continued the second
: act of her evening
: smoking binge.
: Regrettably, even
: the super-confident Ryan
: chickened out and told
: me he was gonna bow out
: for the night around 1
: a.m. With my wingman
: heading out the door, my
: confidence was gone so I
: took a final glance at
: my remaining nicotine
: hotties in the crowd and
: left for the evening, a
: little disappointed
: about
: not having made my move
: on the blonde.
:
: But the thrills were
: still not completely
: done for the evening.
: As I'm approaching the
: exit door, there stands
: Jamie about to step
: outside. I asked her
: what was up and she said
: she just needed to get
: away from the
: loud music for a minute
: or so. Unsurprisingly,
: she extracted a Marlboro
: Light from her purse in
: front of the door and
: stepped outside with me.
: Standing there in her
: white wedding gown,
: Jamie fired up what may
: very well have been the
: first cigarette of her
: married life....and I
: got to be there to see
: it rather than her new
: hubby. We only talked
: for a minute or so, and
: I still can't believe I
: didn't exploit her
: connections with the
: smoking hotties in the
: bar specially the blonde
: with the blue skirt) for
: a character reference.
: My idiocy knows no
: bounds sometimes.
:
: Even though the evening
: had one of my
: characteristically
: disappointing endings, I
: walked to my car with a
: smile on my face that
: evening. My senses had
: been overwhelmed by
: smoke, and when finally
: sitting in the
: nonsmoking environment
: of my car, it hit me how
: bad clothes reeked of
: smoke....smoke that
: almost exclusively came
: from the lungs of some
: of the hottest young
: ladies I'd ever seen.
: Even as one of the
: biggest lost
: opportunities of my
: memory, it will remain
: entrenched in my mind as
: the
: smokiest night of my
: life.
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