My second collection of poems - Memoir of a dog - has finally arrived back from the printer in satisfactory form.
A great relief after 2 years of preparation.
Alos, My wife Leanne and I will be undertaking a number of festival performances through the first part of 2009. Leanne is a singer songwriter and we perform both together and individually. Nice to get properly paid work, for a change.
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on January 9, 2009, 9:42 am