Posted by davidR
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on November 20, 2008, 11:42 am
isolation is
a house
with four
walls
and a
roof
but no
windows,
inside,
a cut-out
card-board figure
sits
and contemplates
silence
stagnation,
a blackish
moss-like cancer
makes
the figure's
thoughts meander
running nostrils drip,
the pools
give birth to memories,
...he once knew a woman
she believed
she
knew his
every thought
so there
was
no need
for communication
...nor windows
opened,
they only allow
for
the wind to prevail
and
thoughts to escape
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