Posted by artur miller johnson on 1/21/2006, 4:38 pm, in reply to "please comment/critique on my poetry" one has to wonder why dont you understand they hypo allergenic reaction you have on your scented creams exactly if one had to respond no need for any of your secretion on my important points for get about rule number 3 only 2 posts per day and if we have to use your lubrications to unwind the neutral pelvis then i guess its a long lonely windy road for some and for others then they want to win bingo how difficult is that to understand....
69.231.72.187
during the flicking of your tongue
then it wouild have to be death of the inter- course
dont ask for java or mutual satisfaction
its interaction...
if i have to interact then i would rather watch tv.......
thanks for understanding
what most cant even believe as important
most want to hear what others think
and then they want the friction of good, going on better
but just user more verbs
talk to you
say all their garden troubles
show you their naked body you feel sick at seeing what they think is excellent
too much stimulation for your eyes
you feel sick
you vomit
you want to just sit in peace
watch the waves bank themselve on the bend
without having to smile
talk
or respond
no sign in sheets
no chit chats
no ....gently waving back and forth
i think its reclusive
its not about connections
its just about writing without rewards
without need of approval
without a response
without the need to resond
without needs PERIOD.....
no verbs
no pronound
no adjective
and no real meetings
just words you share without needs
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