Posted by Chelsea Kent on January 18, 2003, 10:42 am, in reply to "Re: Chelsea's Batgirl Story" And to that "tell it like it is" guy, David Banner: what's not to like about Luis Rivera's story? It has word pics and sexual tension as well. It's got a good laboratory setting, a buildup, and a climax. It's sexy that the She Hulk reverts back to human form and finds herself naked in the end. Any reader worth his or her salt will gladly appreciate a good story like Luis' over one that is perfectly worded and punctuated that may not be as good a story. Sometimes, you have to look past the writing style to the story, especially when someone may be trying out a new and different language. And by the way, the story was good enough for him to translate into French, of all languages! When any writing gets translated into another language, that is considered in publishing a great compliment to the writer. So, I say good work and way to go, Luis! Please send more. -Chels
Thanks very much for the encouragement, Unmasker. It makes me feel good that you'd compliment the word pictures and sexual tension in my story. Maybe I'll finish it WHEN Red brings Alter Ego back to us. I hope that's soon. :)
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