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Other Ideas for the fan fiction.

Posted by stevescalf1 on 11/7/2009, 8:53 pm, in reply to "excellent start! go for it!"
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There's still alot I have to write still(I'm barliy passed the chapter where Carol wakes from the coma), but in my head, the ideas for more plot ideas just keep pouring out. As I said in my last post, Carol becomes Ms. Marvel again and even Marcus takes on the role of "The Scarlet Marvel". I know that the core of the story I'm making here is really a romance between Carol and this version of Marcus, but I like the idea of them not only "hooking up", but crime fighting together. And I also like the idea of them having many cameos with many different Marvel characters. I know I wanted alot of team ups with Spider-Man, Iron Man(because in this story, Marcus is a tech designer), and the X-Men. And when they meet with the X-Men, Carol & Rogue finally have the honest-to-god closer they've needed in the real comics for decades. I also wanted to throw in as many side villians as I could for them to fight. I can't think of many, but do know of a few that came to mind: Sabertooth, Mystique, MODOK, and Death Bird. Heh, it would be like the old 70's series when I think about it. But the final main story plot will be when Kang finally comes to that reality. Marcus & Carol will of course do there best to stop Marcus's evil(and strange) time-traveling father, but it'll be a close battle in the end. Another big kicker I was thinking at the end was that in order to stop Kang, while saving Carol's life, Marcus gives up his life to save the woman he loves. Now, for this fan fiction, it would be a classic tear jerker to be sure, but I was still thinking of two different conlusions to this action. 1) Carol, once again must moarn the death of someone she loves, but pushes on and continues to fight crime as a super hero. And there's a small hint she may help form the Avengers in that reality. OR.... 2) Same thing(or not), but the kicker will be that she's pregnant. Now, unlike Avengers vol.1 # 200, she know's it's Marcus's child and may decide to keep it because in the end she truely loved him. Like I said, the ending's still a working progress, but that's all I got so far. Tell me what you all think. Fan fictions are fun, and I'd love to know what other Ms. Marvel fans would think of my story. --Previous Message-- : : : --Previous Message-- : While I've got the floor, there's something : i've been wanting to ask you guys for awhile : now. Has anyone ever wrote a fan fiction : story of Ms. Marvel before? When I first : found this site, it was linked to a site : called "This Woman, This Warrior; The : Carol Danvers Homepage." I've seen many : great things on this site: Comic covers of : Ms. Marvel issues, pictures, fan art And fan : fiction. : : Some of the stories these fans did was kinda : cool. But, like all things, they were always : cut short and left me wanting more. Right : before I found this site, I began to do a : fan fiction of Ms. Marvel of my own. Not : wanting to base it on Earth 616, I began : thinking of a alternate story for her, kinda : like a "What If" fan story. After : buying the 2nd season of the X-Men : cartoon(1990's), I thought of the perfect : story. : : Based on this series, my story takes place : after episode 22: "A Rogue's : Tale". On that episode, Mystique & : the Brotherhood trick rogue into going to : the hospital where Carol Danver's body lays : in a coma after Rogue steals her powers. But : at that same time, the part of Carol inside : Rogue fought to take over her body. To make : the episode short, Rogue wins the mind war : & rejects Mystique's offer to return to : her. The episode ends with Rogue visiting : Carol at the hospital, and shows a hint that : Carol may come out of the coma. : : Now, you guys know of Marcus? Yes, Marcus. : Son of Immortus and the son of Kang(his : father's are the same dude from a different : reality). The Immortus's Marcus was stuck in : limbo, and to anyone who's ever read : Avengers vol. 1 #200,I DON'T NEED TO EXPLAIN : WHAT HAPPENS! But for those who haven't read : it, to keep it short, Marcus controls her : mind and "USES" her. Now Kang's : Marcus was totally different, and was around : during Avengers vol. 3, when Carol was : Warbird. He was enchanted by her beauty, but : he was a noble man, and tried to win Carol's : trust instead of just using her. Carol : didn't trust him, but allowed him to help : her stop his father, Kang. But in the end, : Kang killed Marcus for this act. : : Now at the beginning of this story, a new : version of Marcus awakes inside Kang's : abanded base in a Limbo-like pocket realm. : He has no memories of his past, but knows : just how to use the ship and all of it's : technology. after accessing the ship's main : computer, he learns all about Kang, the : Avengers, and the different versions of : himself. He also learns of Carol Danvers, : how the different versions of him was : affected by her beauty as well as her : strength. After coming to terms with this : info, he decides to use Kang's tech to head : to a reality of Earth and help protect it. : It's then he finds the reality where Carol : stays in a coma at a hospital, and chooses : to go there. : : Marcus goes by the name Stephen Marcus, and : after setting himself up as a well rich tech : designer, he goes to the hospital to visit : Carol(about a day after episode 22). Not : long after his visit, Carol wakes from her : coma, but has no memory of what happened to : her. After claiming himself as Carol's : boyfriend, she's released from the hospital : and she decides to stay with Marcus at his : pent-house appartment in New York. After : about a month together, Carol begins to : reclaim her life again, although she doesn't : remember herself as Ms. Marvel(YET) and most : of her past memories are fuzzy at best. She : gets a job working as an ad editor for : Marcus's small but well known company, and : it's not long before they fall in love. : : However, after watching the news one night : and seeing Rogue on T.V., Carol's mind : quickly flashes, and she begins to remember : herself as Ms. Marvel and what happened to : her. Marcus then comes clean with Carol, and : explains who he really is and where he came : from. He explains to Carol that he can use : Kang's technology to give her back her : powers. But still shocked by all this, she : leaves Marcus. Now this is about as far as I : am in making out the plot of the story : before writing more of it, but I do know : what'll happen next. : : After helping someone in an allyway, Carol : remembers how much she misses being a hero. : She returns to Marcus and asks for his help. : after putting her to sleep, he places her in : a pod-like machine that amps up her : Kree/Human evolution. It not only restores : her powers, but makes her able to absorb and : control energy(in other words, makes her at : Warbird level). After getting her powers : back, Carol becomes Ms. Marvel once again, : and has many adventures. And Marcus, using : Kang's Scarlet Centurion body suit, as well : as powers alittle like Carol's, he takes the : name "Scarlet Marvel",(because he : wears the body suit of Scarlet Centurion : with a mask like Carol's). : : That's all I've got so far. Tell me what you : think. : : :

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Message Thread: Ms. Marvel fan fiction anyone? - stevescalf1 11/6/2009, 11:43 pm excellent start! go for it! - DGTrixie 11/7/2009, 12:21 am Other Ideas for the fan fiction. - stevescalf1 11/7/2009, 8:53 pm Chapter update, need a idea.... - stevescalf1 11/13/2009, 10:07 pm Keeping the spirit alive! - stevescalf1 11/21/2009, 4:17 pm she's not a secretary.... - DGTrixie 11/21/2009, 7:43 pm Re: she's not a secretary.... - boerne 11/21/2009, 8:36 pm Thanks for the info. - stevescalf1 11/22/2009, 12:14 am Down to two choices now. - stevescalf1 11/22/2009, 4:05 pm Freelance... because her time will her own. >>> - DGTrixie 11/23/2009, 5:44 pm A special thank you to DGtrixie & Vanhelsin. - stevenscalf1 11/24/2009, 1:55 pm Re: A special thank you to DGtrixie & Vanhelsin. - boerne 6:37 pm Yesterday Re: Chapter update, need a idea.... - DGTrixie 11/13/2009, 11:27 pm « Back to thread

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