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excellent start! go for it!

Posted by DGTrixie on 11/7/2009, 12:21 am, in reply to "Ms. Marvel fan fiction anyone?"
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--Previous Message-- : While I've got the floor, there's something : i've been wanting to ask you guys for awhile : now. Has anyone ever wrote a fan fiction : story of Ms. Marvel before? When I first : found this site, it was linked to a site : called "This Woman, This Warrior; The : Carol Danvers Homepage." I've seen many : great things on this site: Comic covers of : Ms. Marvel issues, pictures, fan art And fan : fiction. : : Some of the stories these fans did was kinda : cool. But, like all things, they were always : cut short and left me wanting more. Right : before I found this site, I began to do a : fan fiction of Ms. Marvel of my own. Not : wanting to base it on Earth 616, I began : thinking of a alternate story for her, kinda : like a "What If" fan story. After : buying the 2nd season of the X-Men : cartoon(1990's), I thought of the perfect : story. : : Based on this series, my story takes place : after episode 22: "A Rogue's : Tale". On that episode, Mystique & : the Brotherhood trick rogue into going to : the hospital where Carol Danver's body lays : in a coma after Rogue steals her powers. But : at that same time, the part of Carol inside : Rogue fought to take over her body. To make : the episode short, Rogue wins the mind war : & rejects Mystique's offer to return to : her. The episode ends with Rogue visiting : Carol at the hospital, and shows a hint that : Carol may come out of the coma. : : Now, you guys know of Marcus? Yes, Marcus. : Son of Immortus and the son of Kang(his : father's are the same dude from a different : reality). The Immortus's Marcus was stuck in : limbo, and to anyone who's ever read : Avengers vol. 1 #200,I DON'T NEED TO EXPLAIN : WHAT HAPPENS! But for those who haven't read : it, to keep it short, Marcus controls her : mind and "USES" her. Now Kang's : Marcus was totally different, and was around : during Avengers vol. 3, when Carol was : Warbird. He was enchanted by her beauty, but : he was a noble man, and tried to win Carol's : trust instead of just using her. Carol : didn't trust him, but allowed him to help : her stop his father, Kang. But in the end, : Kang killed Marcus for this act. : : Now at the beginning of this story, a new : version of Marcus awakes inside Kang's : abanded base in a Limbo-like pocket realm. : He has no memories of his past, but knows : just how to use the ship and all of it's : technology. after accessing the ship's main : computer, he learns all about Kang, the : Avengers, and the different versions of : himself. He also learns of Carol Danvers, : how the different versions of him was : affected by her beauty as well as her : strength. After coming to terms with this : info, he decides to use Kang's tech to head : to a reality of Earth and help protect it. : It's then he finds the reality where Carol : stays in a coma at a hospital, and chooses : to go there. : : Marcus goes by the name Stephen Marcus, and : after setting himself up as a well rich tech : designer, he goes to the hospital to visit : Carol(about a day after episode 22). Not : long after his visit, Carol wakes from her : coma, but has no memory of what happened to : her. After claiming himself as Carol's : boyfriend, she's released from the hospital : and she decides to stay with Marcus at his : pent-house appartment in New York. After : about a month together, Carol begins to : reclaim her life again, although she doesn't : remember herself as Ms. Marvel(YET) and most : of her past memories are fuzzy at best. She : gets a job working as an ad editor for : Marcus's small but well known company, and : it's not long before they fall in love. : : However, after watching the news one night : and seeing Rogue on T.V., Carol's mind : quickly flashes, and she begins to remember : herself as Ms. Marvel and what happened to : her. Marcus then comes clean with Carol, and : explains who he really is and where he came : from. He explains to Carol that he can use : Kang's technology to give her back her : powers. But still shocked by all this, she : leaves Marcus. Now this is about as far as I : am in making out the plot of the story : before writing more of it, but I do know : what'll happen next. : : After helping someone in an allyway, Carol : remembers how much she misses being a hero. : She returns to Marcus and asks for his help. : after putting her to sleep, he places her in : a pod-like machine that amps up her : Kree/Human evolution. It not only restores : her powers, but makes her able to absorb and : control energy(in other words, makes her at : Warbird level). After getting her powers : back, Carol becomes Ms. Marvel once again, : and has many adventures. And Marcus, using : Kang's Scarlet Centurion body suit, as well : as powers alittle like Carol's, he takes the : name "Scarlet Marvel",(because he : wears the body suit of Scarlet Centurion : with a mask like Carol's). : : That's all I've got so far. Tell me what you : think. :

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Message Thread: Ms. Marvel fan fiction anyone? - stevescalf1 11/6/2009, 11:43 pm excellent start! go for it! - DGTrixie 11/7/2009, 12:21 am Other Ideas for the fan fiction. - stevescalf1 11/7/2009, 8:53 pm Chapter update, need a idea.... - stevescalf1 11/13/2009, 10:07 pm Keeping the spirit alive! - stevescalf1 11/21/2009, 4:17 pm she's not a secretary.... - DGTrixie 11/21/2009, 7:43 pm Re: she's not a secretary.... - boerne 11/21/2009, 8:36 pm Thanks for the info. - stevescalf1 11/22/2009, 12:14 am Down to two choices now. - stevescalf1 11/22/2009, 4:05 pm Freelance... because her time will her own. >>> - DGTrixie 11/23/2009, 5:44 pm A special thank you to DGtrixie & Vanhelsin. - stevenscalf1 11/24/2009, 1:55 pm Re: A special thank you to DGtrixie & Vanhelsin. - boerne 11/29/2009, 6:37 pm Re: Chapter update, need a idea.... - DGTrixie 11/13/2009, 11:27 pm « Back to thread

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