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Posted by Red Queen
on 5/13/2009, 4:59 pm, in reply to "BATTLE?? also..RP Feedback?"
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Wow, you're taking Emma way back.
Questions, is this a flashback, or do you plan continuing from here? It would help me know how to shape the rivalry a bit.
Also, just out of curiosity, what will her relation to Scott be? Still dating?
Your Emma seems too nice, and too emotional. Granted, she is more emotional when her students are involved, but I think you had her show too much emotion throughout the RP as a whole. She's supposed to be a frigid b###h, and even more so when in diamond form. [She's supposed to feel nothing in diamond form from what I understand.]
I personally liked the first person point of view.
But, my first Attempt at Emma was horrible, so I guess I shouldn't really be talking ...
Oh, and I will be borrowing you stats for the battle, and I am excited to have an Emma on the site. I was planning on shaping a rivalry with her prior to your arrival, so this is just icing.
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